I know that, it's just a standard message.
But I made it shorter now so I don't have to use personal pronouns. I personally don't like using personal pronouns when refering to other people, as I think he/she is completely useless. There should only be an 'it', in my opinion. I think it's impressive that the most important thing that should make our references to each other different was our genders, why not hair colors? He = red hair, she = black hair, etc... What a waste of words, and how stupid towards those who don't identify with their gender.
And Darvince is right, Naru523 may spend 5 + 3 + 5 + 9 / 5 = 14,8 = 15 resources.