Author Topic: The Poem (Read 11767 times)

atomic7732 · « **on:** May 09, 2010, 12:05:02 AM »

What you do, is you rhyme with the previous line, and then you make another line not ryming... So for example

My first two lines are:

We look up to the sky
We see spirals...

deoxy99 · « **Reply #1 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:27:17 PM »

Spirals have been turned into virals
Because of my cell phone.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #2 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:44:08 PM »

I then hear your ring tone
It makes me fall off Earth

btw, deoxy, how does viral rhyme with spirals?

deoxy99 · « **Reply #3 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:46:08 PM »

Quote from: NeutronStar on May 09, 2010, 12:44:08 PM

I then hear your ring tone
It makes me fall off Earth

btw, deoxy, how does viral rhyme with spirals?

Nothing rhymes with spirals.

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Earth is worth,
Thousands of Cents

atomic7732 · « **Reply #4 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:47:25 PM »

Yeah, virals does.

Umm... Poems don't keep starting like

I like pie
Pie is good
Good is in my face
Faces keep going around
Around the Earth
Earth likes feet
Feet walk on it.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #5 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:49:37 PM »

"Oh look, its by the other fence!"
Said the man who looked to shy

atomic7732 · « **Reply #6 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:50:30 PM »

Quote from: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:49:18 PM

YOU ARE TOO STRICT! I give up.

No, I just can't get any rhythm out of it.

I am never too strict. You just get annoyed at anything that isn't going your way.

deoxy99 · « **Reply #7 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:50:38 PM »

I like pie,
and I will throw one in your face.

deoxy99 · « **Reply #8 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:51:39 PM »

Quote from: NeutronStar on May 09, 2010, 12:50:30 PM

Quote from: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:49:18 PM
YOU ARE TOO STRICT! I give up.
No, I just can't get any rhythm out of it.

I am never too strict. You just get annoyed at anything that isn't going your way.

Sometimes my way is right.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #9 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:52:26 PM »

How do you know if it is right? No one can know.

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Hey, you need to keep up the pace
Don't you dare ever slow down

deoxy99 · « **Reply #10 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:54:23 PM »

I WAS THINKING YOU WERE GOING TO PUT PACE AS THE LAST WORD! I WAS RIGHT!

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I weigh a pound,
and that's 500 pounds on Earth.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #11 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:56:47 PM »

Quote from: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:54:23 PM

I WAS THINKING YOU WERE GOING TO PUT PACE AS THE LAST WORD! I WAS RIGHT!

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I weigh a pound,
and that's 500 pounds on Earth.

down, pound?

deoxy99 · « **Reply #12 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:58:27 PM »

OH MY GOD, STOP BEING SO FREAKING STRICT.

deoxy99 · « **Reply #13 on:** May 09, 2010, 12:59:03 PM »

I hate this game.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #14 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:05:09 PM »

Quote from: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:59:03 PM

I hate this game.

Cool! jk

Naru523 · « **Reply #15 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:44:35 PM »

To the town I saw
A man with a gun

atomic7732 · « **Reply #16 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:47:37 PM »

Is this restart? What does it rhyme with... Ok this'll be a restart.

It was pointing at kids having fun
I ran to him

deoxy99 · « **Reply #17 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:48:46 PM »

His hat had a brim
I kicked his leg

atomic7732 · « **Reply #18 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:51:01 PM »

He said "stupid keg!"
The kids ran away

deoxy99 · « **Reply #19 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:51:51 PM »

Quote from: NeutronStar on May 09, 2010, 01:51:01 PM

He said "stupid keg!"
The kids ran away

He said "You'll pay!".
I slipped on a banana peel.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #20 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:53:30 PM »

The ground, I could feel
He stomped on me

Naru523 · « **Reply #21 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:53:57 PM »

He tried to shoot me
But failed in the end

deoxy99 · « **Reply #22 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:55:15 PM »

I live in a den
I could smell some soup.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #23 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:57:51 PM »

end? den? whatever... I guess it's okay... not really but... w/e

My dog drives a coupe
He loved to shop

deoxy99 · « **Reply #24 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:58:16 PM »

POP,
Goes the weasel.

Naru523 · « **Reply #25 on:** May 09, 2010, 01:59:16 PM »

Those were hard times
But I overcomed them

deoxy99 · « **Reply #26 on:** May 09, 2010, 02:00:17 PM »

Times/Weasel. They don't rhyme.

Naru523 · « **Reply #27 on:** May 09, 2010, 02:00:40 PM »

Goes/Those

deoxy99 · « **Reply #28 on:** May 09, 2010, 02:01:34 PM »

That's not how poems work. The last words in each line have to rhyme.

atomic7732 · « **Reply #29 on:** May 09, 2010, 02:01:42 PM »

It's not that type of rhyme...