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deoxy99

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The Secret Library
« on: April 06, 2010, 05:24:03 PM »
The Secret Library:

Once upon a time, there was a library that was filled with books. It was filled with special books that are filled with pages of magical charms and wishes. You could read the book and you would be taken there in your mind and dream of the scents, feelings, sights, sounds and tastes. One day, someone called Deoxy99, went to that exact library. Deoxy99 rushed to the science section. He picked up a atom book, which talks about the structure of atoms. Then he started dreaming of atoms, quarks, and elements. The book started freaking out. It seemed to have a curse on it. Deoxy99 was sucked in the book. And he was an atom. He was a lithium atom. Then things started melting. Pictures melted. Dreams melted. Senses melted. Everything and everyone was melted. Then things came back to normal. Deoxy99 closed the book and rushed home to tell his mom. Deoxy99's mom did not believe him. Then Deoxy99 woke up. It was just a dream. "Thank goodness I am still alive and moving." said Deoxy99. But there was a book on his bright and shiny pillow. It was the exact book he had read in the dream. A sticker on it said, "The Secret Library Book: Due Today." He opened it and he dreamed of atoms, quarks, and elements.

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Re: The Secret Library
« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2010, 05:41:16 PM »
YOu asked me to say hi.

So Hi.

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Re: The Secret Library
« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2010, 10:00:34 PM »
Strange. Funny. Good. 9/10.

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Re: The Secret Library
« Reply #3 on: April 06, 2010, 10:04:04 PM »
Thanks, and 9/10 is still pretty good!