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atomic7732

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Poetic table of The Elements
« on: March 04, 2010, 08:15:36 PM »
http://www.everypoet.com/absurdities/elements/

A bunch of poems of the elements.

Aluminum by Mmm_Pie almost sounds like a song...

Then "quotes" from it are used in some of the other aluminum poems!

Btw, when I was younger I make a "song" and posted it here. It was gone a month later as it had but one fact. That it was radioactive. I wrote it when I was like 7 or 8 so it may sound stupid. It was awesome to me back then.  :-[ Now here is a comparison of poems...

Mine:

Technetium walkin' down the street
Till he finds his self asleep
When will he awake?
Is it radioactive?

CHORUS
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes.
I can't believe
I can't believe
I can

Technetium walkin' walkin'
Technetium walkin' walkin'
Technetium walkin' down the street
Till he finds his self asleep
When will he awake?
Is Technetium radioactive?

CHORUS

I can
I can

Tara:

dmitri mendeleev, how can you predict instability?
do you have a dog, Technetium?
can you survive in the snow of serbia?
are you, like mendeleev, your mother's favorite?

yes, yes, yes. you are.

if you listen closely, you can see that the element number forty-three has a divine purpose.
see the dog on its leash.
is everything in the world science? is it art? love?
it is radioactive.

yes, yes, yes.

once i was young, i got sick.
once when i was old, i journeyed to the north pole and never returned.
i walked my dog, Technetium. i walked it for forty-three miles.



Now look at the red. I have a feeling it was a somewhat copy as some of those "Aluminum Copiers" as I shall call them...
« Last Edit: March 04, 2010, 08:24:30 PM by NeutronStar »

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Re: Poetic table of The Elements
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2010, 08:31:18 PM »
Oh, also. Found another copier. I sware I was the first. I have a song I do not totally remember, but when I was that young also I had a song about Radon that said:

CHORUS
Silent and swift
Deadly and fast

Go [sic] higher
And try not to die


The green I came up with swinging with my friends doing rule breaking swing tricks!!!!

This is the ****ing stupid a*****e who copied me's ****ing poem!!!!

Silent and swift
deadly and fast

it comes as a gas
and will always last it cant be seen or smelt
a form of radium
but in a class of its own
can be helpful
yes usually harmful
its in your walls
and in the ground
tells when earthquakes
are on their way
its radon

I can sware I looked at none of these poems to write the songs!!!!

I will try to find the original. I have the book somewhere... I think.

EDIT

The lyrics are:

Swift and shift
Deadly and fast
rule out the number
86

...

Let's get high!
(and try not to die)
Let's get high!
And rule the skies!

...

This in no way means to use drugs. I was on swings... I actually meant, altitude!
« Last Edit: March 04, 2010, 08:49:34 PM by NeutronStar »