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Title: I... I don't know...
Post by: atomic7732 on February 16, 2012, 09:47:36 PM
Wishes in Vain

How cruel it is,
The mind's ability
To wish for that which is impossible
To wish for something it knows can never come true

Why, when we know this,
do we continue wishing for such things?
Peaceful things, like a united humanity
A world without dangers

These things, although,
Could be debated by many as possible
But I know, in my mind,
they will never come true

Could it be,
That there may be
A glint of hope?
A light, at the end of a long, dark, tunnel?

Maybe not,
And these things we will likely never know
But still, this does not matter,
We wish on


Some info on what inspired me to write this:
Ponies inspired this writing. Sometimes I really do get the feeling, that I do want to live in Equestria, the feeling is so... I almost want to say painful, but it's very subtle. And I was searching for an answer to explain it, which was obviously to no avail. I also wanted it to be relate-able to other things as well, which is very evident.

Edited for title. Something I am not good at coming up with. Also background info.
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: Naru523 on February 16, 2012, 09:50:11 PM
needs more explosions
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: Darvince on February 16, 2012, 09:52:57 PM
Needs more oldnaru coming back...
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: Naru523 on February 16, 2012, 09:53:32 PM
Needs more oldnaru coming back...
ur wish has bin grant
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: Darvince on February 16, 2012, 09:55:45 PM
/me faceearthed.
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: FiahOwl on February 16, 2012, 10:02:14 PM

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Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: Naru523 on February 16, 2012, 10:07:11 PM
The morning sun begins to rise
As everyone begins to tell lies
The dreaded world begins to come
But with new beginnings for some
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: Bla on February 17, 2012, 04:35:07 AM
Very good poem.

Idk what to say... Wishing for impossible things is so annoying. Stop being impossible! >:/
Title: Re: I... I don't know...
Post by: vh on February 17, 2012, 06:06:42 AM
*in reply to title*
i know right