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Title: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:05:02 AM
What you do, is you rhyme with the previous line, and then you make another line not ryming... So for example


My first two lines are:

We look up to the sky
We see spirals...
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:27:17 PM
Spirals have been turned into virals
Because of my cell phone.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:44:08 PM
I then hear your ring tone
It makes me fall off Earth

btw, deoxy, how does viral rhyme with spirals?
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:46:08 PM
I then hear your ring tone
It makes me fall off Earth

btw, deoxy, how does viral rhyme with spirals?
Nothing rhymes with spirals.

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Earth is worth,
Thousands of Cents
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:47:25 PM
Yeah, virals does.

Umm... Poems don't keep starting like

I like pie
Pie is good
Good is in my face
Faces keep going around
Around the Earth
Earth likes feet
Feet walk on it.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:49:37 PM
"Oh look, its by the other fence!"
Said the man who looked to shy
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:50:30 PM
YOU ARE TOO STRICT! I give up.
No, I just can't get any rhythm out of it.

I am never too strict. You just get annoyed at anything that isn't going your way.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:50:38 PM
I like pie,
and I will throw one in your face.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:51:39 PM
YOU ARE TOO STRICT! I give up.
No, I just can't get any rhythm out of it.

I am never too strict. You just get annoyed at anything that isn't going your way.
Sometimes my way is right.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:52:26 PM
How do you know if it is right? No one can know.

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Hey, you need to keep up the pace
Don't you dare ever slow down
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:54:23 PM
I WAS THINKING YOU WERE GOING TO PUT PACE AS THE LAST WORD! I WAS RIGHT!

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I weigh a pound,
and that's 500 pounds on Earth.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 12:56:47 PM
I WAS THINKING YOU WERE GOING TO PUT PACE AS THE LAST WORD! I WAS RIGHT!

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I weigh a pound,
and that's 500 pounds on Earth.

down, pound?
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:58:27 PM
OH MY GOD, STOP BEING SO FREAKING STRICT.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 12:59:03 PM
I hate this game.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 01:05:09 PM
I hate this game.
Cool! jk
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: Naru523 on May 09, 2010, 01:44:35 PM

To the town I saw
A man with a gun
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 01:47:37 PM
Is this restart? What does it rhyme with... Ok this'll be a restart.

It was pointing at kids having fun
I ran to him
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 01:48:46 PM
His hat had a brim
I kicked his leg
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 01:51:01 PM
He said "stupid keg!"
The kids ran away
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 01:51:51 PM
He said "stupid keg!"
The kids ran away
He said "You'll pay!".
I slipped on a banana peel.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 01:53:30 PM
The ground, I could feel
He stomped on me
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: Naru523 on May 09, 2010, 01:53:57 PM
He tried to shoot me
But failed in the end
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 01:55:15 PM
I live in a den
I could smell some soup.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 01:57:51 PM
end? den? whatever... I guess it's okay... not really but... w/e

My dog drives a coupe
He loved to shop
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 01:58:16 PM
POP,
Goes the weasel.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: Naru523 on May 09, 2010, 01:59:16 PM
Those were hard times
But I overcomed them
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 02:00:17 PM
Times/Weasel. They don't rhyme.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: Naru523 on May 09, 2010, 02:00:40 PM
Goes/Those
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: deoxy99 on May 09, 2010, 02:01:34 PM
That's not how poems work. The last words in each line have to rhyme.
Title: Re: The Poem
Post by: atomic7732 on May 09, 2010, 02:01:42 PM
It's not that type of rhyme...