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« on: January 09, 2012, 11:07:17 PM » |
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I will stop studying and playing video games to write fiction I am going to write a fiction. A fiction of wonders, I fiction of awesomeness. If you don't know why it's so dramatic, it's because I'm listening to epic music. I get inspired by epic music.
The fiction will be about the U.S. government revealing that 9/11 was an inside job, the ISS has a bomb, which could detonate any minute the U.S. government decides they don't want a 1 Billion dollar structure to survive , Nuclear weapons are put at key locations into earth's crust, so that if they wanted they could blow up earths crust, Mexico being annexed into the U.S., and North America descending into chaos. The U.S. with her military might, will be able to keep control of her states, but will lose New York, along with New England. Canada will lose New Brunswick, and Aeridani will ascend to a world power, by 2027.
Then Sweden will invade Copenhagen, the royal family and relatives killed. A citizen of Denmark rises to the top, and Denmark becomes a Monarchy-Democracy. As Socialism then rises, Europe will enter a Golden Age, and the New U.S.S.R. will form.
The war ends, three new countries form, many die.
The Space Age has also had a kick in the butt, it going strong again. By 2032, Nippon lands a man on the moon, China did in 2028. Scientists migrate from the U.S. to the ASSU, Blaist States, and New USSR. By 2038, Japan lands a man on an asteroid, and the Blaist States, USSR, and U.K. land men on the moon. The ASSU, having the advantage of prebuilt infrastructure, Go directly to Mars. Strenia I launches in 2039, and slingshots around Venus on a trajectory to Mars. In January of 2040, Keneda Clissen and Chris Watson are the first people to land on Mars. Years later, the whole world is Socialist, and humans can live over 800 Years due to augumentation.
I don't want to spoil the whole story, so I need your help.
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Darvince
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« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2012, 11:13:27 PM » |
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Yet another bloody Aeridani fiction? Although this one seems like it's slightly less self-centered than your other eight Aeridani fictions that you have. I might want to help with this, as it looks like it could turn out to be not a failure.
Is it going to be ATL style or novel style, so I know how to write, since I'd mostlikely be able to help on the weekends, because I have school and am constantly interrupted during the weekdays to do things?
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Naru523
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« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2012, 11:19:59 PM » |
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Wait, whaaaat?
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2012, 11:22:02 PM » |
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Yet another bloody Aeridani fiction? Although this one seems like it's slightly less self-centered than your other eight Aeridani fictions that you have. I might want to help with this, as it looks like it could turn out to be not a failure.
Is it going to be ATL style or novel style, so I know how to write, since I'd mostlikely be able to help on the weekends, because I have school and am constantly interrupted during the weekdays to do things?
A combination of both ATL and Novel. |
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deoxy99
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« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2012, 12:07:30 AM » |
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I've got an idea: a Hetalia-like book where the countries talk to each other, however without stereotypes because stereotypes are stupid.
Mostly it'll be an ATL, with "scenarios".
Scenarios are a type of arrangement that'll be in the book (each with a different... well, ATL scenario):
Scenario 1
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Scenario 2
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Okay, maybe I'm just going to do that right now.
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #5 on: January 10, 2012, 08:00:02 AM » |
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Hetalia-like sounds a bit interesting.
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mudkipz
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« Reply #6 on: January 10, 2012, 01:35:36 PM » |
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needs more explo- nvm.
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deoxy99
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« Reply #7 on: January 10, 2012, 01:36:41 PM » |
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Fiah will rage if you say that you know.
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atomic7732
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« Reply #8 on: January 10, 2012, 02:59:30 PM » |
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Fiah will rage if you say that you know.
How do you know what other people will do, and why are you stating it? It's almost like you're talking in 3rd person. Atomic will question your actions you know. |
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #9 on: January 10, 2012, 03:23:36 PM » |
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Fiah will rage if you say that you know.
How do you know what other people will do, and why are you stating it? It's almost like you're talking in 3rd person. Atomic will question your actions you know.Because he knows me. |
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deoxy99
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« Reply #10 on: January 10, 2012, 04:42:48 PM » |
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Fiah will rage if you say that you know.
How do you know what other people will do, and why are you stating it? It's almost like you're talking in 3rd person. Atomic will question your actions you know.Because he knows me. Yes I do. |
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #11 on: January 10, 2012, 05:32:19 PM » |
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This is a draft.
The U.S. Reveals that 9/11 was an inside job, the ISS has a bomb, which could detonate any minute the U.S. government decides they don't want a 1 Billion dollar structure to survive, Nuclear weapons are put at key locations into earth's crust, so that if they wanted they could blow up earths crust. By brute force, she manages to hold together 49 of her states. Pheonix declares independence, and Boston. Boston, the start of the first revolution, the start of the second.
The world watches with keen interest, and it is often called "the day the world stopped ignoring".
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #12 on: January 10, 2012, 05:39:27 PM » |
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Europe gets scared.
And Vermont and New Hampshire join Massachusetts, a citizen by the nickname of Fiah Storm picked to lead. The alliance is called the Aeridani Rebels. The Second Revolution has begun.
And now Phoenix is squashed.
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mudkipz
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« Reply #13 on: January 10, 2012, 05:59:14 PM » |
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hi, us government needs to mobilize troops and nuke the rebellion back to the stone age.
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Naru523
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« Reply #14 on: January 10, 2012, 06:03:58 PM » |
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Needs more explosives. I'd love to see all of those buggers die in a hole.
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #15 on: January 10, 2012, 06:04:50 PM » |
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hi, us government needs to mobilize troops and nuke the rebellion back to the stone age.
So nuking one of the most historical, smartest, coolest, place in the U.S. is an option? Not to mention all the radiation heading for Washington D.C. after that. |
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #16 on: January 10, 2012, 06:06:37 PM » |
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I don't know about you, but nuking one of the most populated regions in the U.S., and one of the largest cities in the world is not a good idea. That;s more then 1/10 of the U.S. population gone on the spot, and not to mention the radiation after-affects...
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #17 on: January 10, 2012, 06:06:59 PM » |
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Better view.
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2012, 06:08:12 PM » |
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Plus, you're nuking the next generation of scientists at MIT.
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mudkipz
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« Reply #19 on: January 10, 2012, 06:14:13 PM » |
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yeah but they're not working for you if this is a rebellion...they're working against you.
so...you nuke them before they develop nukes and nuke you!
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atomic7732
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« Reply #20 on: January 10, 2012, 06:15:39 PM » |
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That map. I want.
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #21 on: January 10, 2012, 06:27:39 PM » |
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #22 on: January 10, 2012, 06:30:34 PM » |
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yeah but they're not working for you if this is a rebellion...they're working against you.
so...you nuke them before they develop nukes and nuke you!
So, nuke them and also kill 2/10 of the U.S. population, render the Atlantic seaboard uninhabitable, and let radiation seep into Washington D.C.? |
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mudkipz
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« Reply #23 on: January 10, 2012, 06:36:01 PM » |
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well if they want to kill you/ overthrow you, of course  |
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Darvince
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« Reply #24 on: January 10, 2012, 07:15:00 PM » |
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Why Phoenix, first of all?
On the map, you missed Apache Junction. It's slightly into Pinal County. However, you might've wanted to only nuke Phoenix, in which case make the nuked area more vertical rectangular shape.
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #25 on: January 10, 2012, 07:17:18 PM » |
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Why Phoenix, first of all?
On the map, you missed Apache Junction. It's slightly into Pinal County. However, you might've wanted to only nuke Phoenix, in which case make the nuked area more vertical rectangular shape.
There is no nuked area. |
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mudkipz
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« Reply #26 on: January 10, 2012, 07:19:55 PM » |
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the rectangular region is! selective nuking what this is
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #27 on: January 10, 2012, 07:21:36 PM » |
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well if they want to kill you/ overthrow you, of course Still, bad idea. |
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mudkipz
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« Reply #28 on: January 10, 2012, 07:23:41 PM » |
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oh, well weren't you wanting to nuke another country's innocent people after they nuked you? rebels want to over throw you, why don't you nuke innocent people?
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FiahOwl
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« Reply #29 on: January 10, 2012, 07:51:18 PM » |
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oh, well weren't you wanting to nuke another country's innocent people after they nuked you? rebels want to over throw you, why don't you nuke innocent people?
Rebels want to get rid of you and make their own country. If you would give them land, they'd be happy. |
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